Question:
Which sounds better for an open house invitation . . . . .?
2009-03-07 14:59:00 UTC
We proudly announce the graduation of our son from [SCHOOL NAME]
or

We are proud to announce the graduation of our son from [SCHOOL NAME]

and then after that I have

Please join us to celebrate his accomplishments
Saturday, June 07

what do you think?
Four answers:
knp_sweetie
2009-03-07 15:04:42 UTC
I like the second one. You should also include the time and location
Ruby Jane
2009-03-07 15:16:19 UTC
l would say the first one...

Because the word " proudly " stands out...and puts an emphasis on the real meaning.
nature hugger
2009-03-07 15:28:29 UTC
we are proud to announce the grad
♥ God Bless Our LEO ♥
2009-03-07 15:06:19 UTC
2nd sounds nice! Congrats!!


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